I thoroughly enjoyed your positing of a female in the role of chieftain! I further appreciated that she was a well balanced character, one with resolve, hidden reserves, and a great deal of tenacity.

Great job showing us Ivorwen's tumultuous internal journey to making peace with Adanel, as well as the strength of the bond between Ivorwen and Dirhael. I especially loved watching them flirt and dance - you drew me in and made me feel as if I was part of the crowd around the bonfire.

Beautifully done all the way around.