http://tanis2014.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tanis2014.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem 2014-03-10 03:25 am (UTC)

Ah, patience ... the price of freedom. Great use of building repetition in this piece. I can feel Tuor straining against those bonds, pushing the limits of his patience as far as he can, then finding that little bit more ... until his chance finally comes.

You've done a great job of choosing the kinds of impactive words that makes a drabble so impressive in such a short space. I admire anyone who can write these!


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