If you've read all this way, have a cookie. You deserve it.
I want my cookie! It is a lot to absorb in a short story. It needs to be a longer story. (Don't mind me. If I like a story I always want it to be longer.)
I'll read it again and it will be easier. The first read-through with so much information was a little difficult.
I really like the structure behind the story, however, and the characters we meet really work for me. The matriarchal elements are fascinating as well.
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I want my cookie! It is a lot to absorb in a short story. It needs to be a longer story. (Don't mind me. If I like a story I always want it to be longer.)
I'll read it again and it will be easier. The first read-through with so much information was a little difficult.
I really like the structure behind the story, however, and the characters we meet really work for me. The matriarchal elements are fascinating as well.