ext_65997 ([identity profile] heartofoshun.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem 2014-03-15 02:13 am (UTC)

If you've read all this way, have a cookie. You deserve it.

I want my cookie! It is a lot to absorb in a short story. It needs to be a longer story. (Don't mind me. If I like a story I always want it to be longer.)

I'll read it again and it will be easier. The first read-through with so much information was a little difficult.

I really like the structure behind the story, however, and the characters we meet really work for me. The matriarchal elements are fascinating as well.

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