Story: I love stories portraying a loving relationship between Elros, Elrond, Maedhros and Maglor. You definitely nailed it here. And the first person really underscores it. There are so many lovely images in this that characterize Elrond so beautifully, I can't cite them all. I think my favorite is them ripping up the battle flag for ribbons. And the banter between Elrond and Celebrian is great. Loved it.

Art: Beautiful! I love the script. You did that yourself? It is wonderful. And I love illuminated manuscripts (medieval/renaissance scholar), so this was totally my cup of tea. Of course, you picked perfect lines to use.

Loved it!