This was great. You've got some good characterisations in there and some really nice little touches that bring those out. I love Celebrian's sharpness - she's definitely Galadriel's daughter here, which I'm glad to see because often I see her written as Celeborn's sedate little girl.

They threw my unworthy life back in my face and allowed him to take Findekáno’s
Ouch :-(

Buggering Balrogs.
Ai! What has been seen...

And the ending - yep, think you got it!