Thank you for your kindness, and also for your message. I'm not sure if I can do corrections to this text now that it has been released. But I will certainly make the corrections you pointed out before I post the story to any of my archives. I knew that something was shaking at my head in those paragraphs, but I couldn't isolate what was specifically causing my unease. Thank you for pinpointing the problem and offering the perfect replacement words.

Thank you for your friendship, your comments, and your constant support.

- Erulisse (one L)