I really loved all the information you threw in about elven aging – and Bilbo conversing with various elves was wonderful. The way you wrote Galadriel was also excellent! I thought that her comment about memory (Memory is a strange thing,” she said almost to herself. “It sparkles and then dims. It gains texture and resembles a topography as varied as the mountains themselves. Over time, memory acquires mass. ) was really interesting – and it certainly sounds like something she would say! The bits of history you threw in were also great (that reference to Elrond's "unusual childhood", for instance, and Galadriel talking about all the things she remembered). You did a great job giving Bilbo his last adventure!