http://tanis2014.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] tanis2014.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem 2014-03-27 03:04 am (UTC)

Ahhhhh young love in the Spring. I found this little awkward sexy story very endearing. And the touches of humor, particular with the fays, really sparkled. There were other shiny bits for me too: Luthien's recognition that her mother certainly knows what she's doing (that made me grin); sending messages by sparrow; the extra blanket appearing out of nowhere, next to the cave; and most especially - this was dancing too ... but without music. What a wonderful description for that ancient act.

The fays, though, were my favorite.

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