http://astris-eldalie.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] astris-eldalie.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem 2014-03-27 04:17 am (UTC)

I absolutely love Orneredh. She's got such a good narrative voice, and I love the idea of someone being sent to plant things to honor the dead. (Certainly gives a plausible explanation for all those "magic green grass! suddenly! no evil thing can touch it, nope" that show up!) And I love that you had Egalmoth show up. That comment of his about Gondolin – You are not the first to do so, of course, but the previous group was particularly successful – was so typically Noldorin. And I loved the way Orneredh kept mentally commenting on things like that.

This was an excellent fic.

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