ext_65997 ([identity profile] heartofoshun.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem 2014-03-29 02:22 am (UTC)

I like this story so much. It is vivid and filled with an earthy realism. It's been a long while since I have found stories of the Northern DĂșnedain which have engaged me as much as yours. The wrestling match a lot of fun. Aragorn is a charmer indeed. And the young women ogling Aragorn is perfect--poor guy! Poor girls. Nethril, of course is totally likeable and well drawn. Your world and its characters are all very convincing. Looking forward to reading more.

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