Thank you so much, Oshun! :D I had so much fun writing Lúthien in this, and I'm so glad she convinces!

Now there is an implication that I could drive a truck through. Perhaps Galadriel has told Lúthien some stories of their wayward youth together in Valinor.

I'm quite sure you're entirely spot-on with this observation. :D I imagine Galadriel and Lúthien to be quite close, and if there are no titillating stories to be shared, I'll have a broomstick for breakfast. And heh, like I said to Bungo above, there is a demonstrable incident in canon where she knocks out her guards with magic in order to run off and do her own thing with a lover, so it doesn't even feel entirely out of character!

I'm glad you liked the love scene as well! :)