Oh, this is lovely, Elleth! I can point to all of the comments above and say "What she said!" and that would be accurate for my reading of the ficlet. And those crossed-out bits from you and Bungo? Oh, those beg to be written! The eroticism (to my tastes) fits the Goldilocks Criteria: not too hot, not too cold, but just right. :^) Loved the imagery of the flowered meadow in moonlight, surrounded by birches, but best of all is how you show Luthien as her mother's daughter: an enchantress - a sexy enchantress!