As you know from your own take on the story, it's going to be a dark tale however it might be written. I so enjoyed yours, and found the idea that he grabbed the one part of her he could, but that it was her neck most chilling! But we both see Drogo and Primula as having loved one another greatly and finding their love enhanced by the boating upon the river in the evening.

And I, too, wonder what else Deloc might have seen, there along the river's bank!

Thank you so!