Wonderful! I loved the interaction between Maglor and Thela, and the little intriguing snippets of life in Dorwinion throughout (I kind of want to know more! Raiding season, the vineyards, the Guard and suchlike). You painted a very vivid picture of it all. The image of the two of them sitting under the stars, with Maglor working out his thoughts and telling tales to Thela with a glass of that famous Dorwinion wine...loved it! Great story :-)