http://engarian.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem 2017-03-30 05:24 pm (UTC)

You did a nice job of incorporating the various stages that iron needs to go through before it is steel. I also liked the fact that you used the less familiar Quenya names. The analysis of the function of a blade like a sword is also a good point - it really is a weapon, not much good for anything else. All in all, this was very well done.

- Erulisse (one L)

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