Awesome. And chilling! (and I don't mean the water...) You have captured very well an aspect of this story that I had not been able to really put a finger to, which is Lalaith's psychological age never really seemed to me to coincide with her physical age. Trauma and all. But, that discrepancy makes it hard for me to really get into what she is doing and feeling, and I think you did an amazing job of making her character accessible. This was masterful!