heartofoshun (
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2020-03-05 02:32 am (UTC)
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I love this. You did a fabulous job with it. The details are wonderful--environment, etc.
I love the part about touching the harp and "fancied that the mist retreated."
The last paragraph is perfect! Yay! Standing applause!
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I love the part about touching the harp and "fancied that the mist retreated."
The last paragraph is perfect! Yay! Standing applause!