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Independence1776 ([personal profile] independence1776) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2012-03-10 12:00 am
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"Cliff" by Independence1776

B2MeM Challenge: b7 Landscape (cliffs) and b7 Poetic Forms (haiku)
Format: Poetry
Genre: Horror
Rating: Teens
Warnings: Torture
Characters: Maedhros, Morgoth
Pairings: None
Summary: Maedhros’ fate is decided.

Morgoth gloated well.
“Pain and torment,” he declared,
“hanging from a cliff.”
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[identity profile] ladyelleth.livejournal.com 2012-03-10 12:02 am (UTC)(link)
Chilling! I find the combination of these prompts very intriguing, especially how it's such a contrast to usual haiku topics - well done, Indy!

[identity profile] aliana1.livejournal.com 2012-03-10 12:06 am (UTC)(link)
Well done! For some reason it seems fitting that Morgoth would communicate in Creepy Haikus. ;)
independence1776: Drawing of Maglor with a harp on right, words "sing of honor lost" and "Noldolantë" on the left and bottom, respectively (Noldolantë)

[personal profile] independence1776 2012-03-10 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

I tried doing a more usual haiku (another prompt is icicle), but I couldn't think of anything interesting. And then I looked at cliff. And being a Feanatic, where else was my mind going to? (I'm a bit creeped out by it myself.)
independence1776: Drawing of Maglor with a harp on right, words "sing of honor lost" and "Noldolantë" on the left and bottom, respectively (Noldolantë)

[personal profile] independence1776 2012-03-10 12:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! You actually made me laugh-- communicating in creepy haikus indeed.
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[personal profile] hhimring 2012-03-10 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I've got the same two prompts--but I never thought of that particular cliff!
Well gloated, Morgoth!
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[personal profile] independence1776 2012-03-10 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

[identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com 2012-03-11 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
So concisely and well done!
independence1776: Drawing of Maglor with a harp on right, words "sing of honor lost" and "Noldolantë" on the left and bottom, respectively (Noldolantë)

[personal profile] independence1776 2012-03-11 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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