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bunn ([identity profile] bunn.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2015-04-04 03:54 pm

Celebrían leaving Rivendell

B2MeM Challenge: Celebrían's capture and torture by orcs, and subsequent departure to Valinor, was a heartbreaking loss that deeply affected her family. At the same time, her departure must have affected not only those close to her, but the entirety of Rivendell.
Format: art, pastels
Rating: gen
Creator’s Notes: I looked through other art showing Celebrían, and they all showed her with enormous, amazing, gorgeous, high-maintenance hair.  But that didn't seem to fit someone traumatised, who was leaving her family and home to seek healing.  So I have made her bald.  She can ride though - it's hard to see how she would get out of Rivendell to the Havens without being able to ride a horse. And the bright star is Eärendil, watching.
Creator’s Apologetic mumblings: I meant to link to the original prompt, but I lost it.  And I meant to post this weeks ago and do a companion piece of Elrond, but work ate my time.  You can click to embiggen though?
shirebound: (Sing Me Home - Baylor)

[personal profile] shirebound 2015-04-04 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniff* That's very poignant.

[identity profile] lenine2.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 04:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Very touching. Celebrian's face shows so much. The fact that she's alone in the picture, even if others are with her but not shown, is very meaningful.

[identity profile] baranduin.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 04:25 pm (UTC)(link)
That's very fine. You have given her much expression on her face, we see the suffering and hope she finds healing in Valinor.

[identity profile] huinare.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 05:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love this. Her expression is wrenching. Very nice use of color also.

I highly approve of your hair (or lack thereof) choice. That was the first thing I noticed, and I'd planned to remark on it even before reading your notes. I don't really hold with the idea that all Elves had long, lustrous, ginormous hair at all times (to that end, I take great delight in portraits of short-haired Lúthien on her quest). Her lack of hair here really visually emphasizes her ordeal and her emotions.

[*mod hat* Here's the prompt! (http://b2mem.livejournal.com/282988.html?thread=4237676#t4237676)]

[identity profile] suzll.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I'm so glad someone claimed this!! This is absolutely beautiful.

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
This very poignant. You are a very talented artist.I love the feeling of isolation.

[identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 06:01 pm (UTC)(link)
I think she would have been very likely to crop her hair - it works very well, for me, to emphasise how she must have felt.

[identity profile] kayleelupin.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
So very beautiful and poignant. Poor Celebrian. This is really well done. :)
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2015-04-04 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh how gorgeous! Her sad expression is very moving, and the subdued blues and greys are perfect for the subject.

[identity profile] lavendertook.livejournal.com 2015-04-04 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Sad and beautiful. Perfect colors, too.

[identity profile] rhymer23.livejournal.com 2015-04-05 08:37 am (UTC)(link)
That's very powerful. I like the fact that the only colour in the picture (apart from whites and greys and blacks) comes from the bright lights of Rivendell behind her, but she's riding away from them, facing us with that terrible grim bleakness on her face, heading out of the picture into the unknown dark.
shirebound: (Sing Me Home - Baylor)

[personal profile] shirebound 2015-04-05 02:44 pm (UTC)(link)
If you're interested in reading a very short, very AU scene, I wrote a story years ago in which chapter 1 relates how Celebrían receives the final healing of her heart and spirit. VERY AU, but very happy. 600 words.

http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=2932
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[personal profile] hhimring 2015-04-06 08:00 am (UTC)(link)
It is a very effective drawing.
She looks a bit like a cancer patient--and although the cause of hair loss isn't the same, it's an analogy that does seem to work for me on several levels.

[identity profile] just-jenni.livejournal.com 2015-04-12 08:48 pm (UTC)(link)

This is very moving. The contrast between Celebrian's expression and the cosy buildings behind her, their windows full of light, speaks volumes about her state of mind. The fact that you made her bald is inspired. It perfectly illustrates that she is not OK. It's true that a picture can speak a thousand words.
elleth: (Gen: Sneak out at Night)

[personal profile] elleth 2018-03-05 11:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Ouch. This hurts to look at on so many levels - as it should, for such a delicate, painful topic. I love so much about it, though... the cold colours, and Celebrían appearing almost spectral with her back turned on Rivendell especially. Most of all, the decision to make her bald. It invites a lot of comparisons with Maedhros post-capture and the "significant haircut" trope at an intersection in life, so it feels very apt as an artistic choice.