ext_311594 ([identity profile] starbrow.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2017-03-17 07:21 pm

Praying for Light by amyfortuna

B2MeM Prompt and Path: Lost Trust or Betrayal, Red Path
Format: Ficlet, Double Drabble
Genre: Drama
Rating: T
Warnings: None
Characters: Fingon
Pairings: none
Summary: Before the dawn of the sixth day of the Battle of Unnumbered Tears, Fingon fears that he has been abandoned by Maedhros.


It has been five full days of battle so far, and no word from Maedhros, no sign of his coming. We have been beaten back over the desert sands, losing more than we can bear. So many dead -- so many Men, fallen like leaves in a forest, so many of the Elves, both Noldor and Sindar. Around me the sand runs red with the blood of friends and black with the blood of enemies, and how shall I withstand it?

Five full days of battle, and it is the darkest hour before the dawn. The early morn is grey and cold with no light to hearten us, no warmth to cheer our souls. I feel that I am back on the ice, in the midst of a trackless wasteland, and before me lies an unknown fate, and behind me lies betrayal and deceit.

He told me this once before. He told me once before that he would come for me, and he did not. The ships burned, and I saw the light of them, far under the lowering clouds, the only light in that fearsome night.

And now I pray for light, for a sign. Where is your beacon, Maedhros?

[identity profile] just-jenni.livejournal.com 2017-03-17 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
How sad and forlorn for Fingon!

There is lovely imagery here despite the gloominess of Fingon's thoughts.

Poor boy needs some lovin'. :( ♥

[identity profile] sashahoneypalm.livejournal.com 2017-03-17 10:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I've never thought of this parallel before, but now that you point it out, it makes so much sense.

[identity profile] kayleelupin.livejournal.com 2017-03-17 11:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Fingon!! <3

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2017-03-18 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
You brilliantly capture the bleakness here.
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[identity profile] bunn.livejournal.com 2017-03-18 08:51 am (UTC)(link)
Hey, I didn't need my heart for anything important, I'll just leave the crushed wreck of it here to be trampled on... :-D

Good writing!
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[personal profile] zdenka 2017-03-18 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh no. :( I can understand his doubts here, but I would hate to think that Fingon died thinking that Maedhros had abandoned him.

[identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com 2017-03-18 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh my - this is heart-wrenching - I really, really, want to give him a hug.

[identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com 2017-03-18 11:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, this hurts! Such a waste of life, and yet allies missing and treachery still to come.

- Erulisse (one L)
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[personal profile] hhimring 2017-03-20 07:27 am (UTC)(link)
Heartbreaking.
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[personal profile] independence1776 2017-03-20 01:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Please put a warning on this, whether none, an appropiate warning, or choose not to warn.