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Elwin ([personal profile] elwinfortuna) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2019-03-03 08:29 am

Excited Faces by amyfortuna

B2MeM Prompt, Card and Number: "So I stand still in front of the crowd," Blind Guardian Lyrics, and charade amber colony moment, Four Words, both l20.
Format: Drabble
Genre: Character Study
Rating: G
Warnings: None
Characters: Maglor
Pairings: None
Creator’s Notes (optional): The full lyrics of this Blind Guardian song, The Minstrel, are:
So I stand still in front of the crowd
Excited faces
What will be next?
I still don't have a clue
I still don't have a clue

Summary: Maglor on the cusp of another spectacular performance.

So I stand still in front of the crowd. This is my moment. They have all gathered here to see me. A few minutes ago, they were humming amongst themselves like a colony of bees, and now they are still as if they were trapped in amber, waiting for me to begin.

It's a grand charade, this waiting. Increase the tension just enough to make them wonder excitedly "what will be next? Maglor the mighty singer stands onstage, so surely a fantastic show awaits us."

The truth is, I still don't have a clue. Not one. Every performance is unique.
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[personal profile] baileyboybee 2019-03-03 10:43 am (UTC)(link)
This was awesome! Great job.
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[personal profile] shirebound 2019-03-03 12:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Well done! This rings true for so many performers, and so many of us.
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[personal profile] kayleearafinwiel 2019-03-03 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
I really love this, well done!
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[personal profile] narya_flame 2019-03-03 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Fabulous - and so very Maglor. Well done!
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[personal profile] erulissedances 2019-03-03 07:32 pm (UTC)(link)
A truth for most musicians, even though sets are usually agreed-upon beforehand if more than a single musician is involved in the performance. Still, I would love the opportunity to hear Maglor perform - to be one of that larger colony of amber-caught bees.

- Erulisse (one L)
elleth: Maglor with his eyes closed and hair streaming in the wind, with the text "Wandering Oversea Singer" and "Maglor" (Silm: Maglor - Oversea Singer)

[personal profile] elleth 2019-03-11 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Great use of tension to heighten Maglor's own insight here. I could feel myself holding my breath with Maglor's audience. ^^
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[personal profile] nialoke 2019-03-17 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, I like this. Especially this line - A few minutes ago, they were humming amongst themselves like a colony of bees, and now they are still as if they were trapped in amber, waiting for me to begin. Love the imagery!