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elwendell ([personal profile] elwendell) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2019-03-14 12:42 am

Granite Memory - by Elwen of the Hidden Valley

B2MeM Prompt:G57(the house itself) Card:Rivendell and Number:160
Format:drabble
Genre:gen
Rating:gen
Warnings:none
Characters:stone
Pairings:none
Creator’s Notes (optional):
Summary:They say elves brought trees to life. What can they do with stone?


GRANITE MEMORY

I remember becoming.
We were whole.
There was pain.
Then I was I.
Metal picked like water and ice.
I was less but I was still I.
I was joined with others; part of a whole again ... a different whole.
We were strong together.

There was being.
Less than before the becoming.
Being was good and then came the soft ones.
Fleeting, their touch; singing of things beyond our knowing.
We became more together.
Hard and soft. Ancient and old.

Then came the fading.
The unmaking.
Sleeping.

“Hey, Joe. This stone looks dressed. Told you these looked like foundations.”

END

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[personal profile] erulissedances 2019-03-14 01:47 am (UTC)(link)
What a great idea! And I loved the format in which you put it and your coda.

- Erulisse (one L)
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[personal profile] shirebound 2019-03-14 11:35 am (UTC)(link)
Oh my, I really like that.
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[personal profile] zdenka 2019-03-14 07:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, I really like this. It gave me the shivers. I like the concept too. The stones of Eregion remembered the Elves, according to Legolas, so why shouldn't the stones of Imladris remember?