Grey Sails at Sunset by Dreamflower

[dreamflower]

B2MeM Challenge: Canon Couples, I-22, "Celeborn and Galadriel"
Format: Dribble
Title: Grey Sails at Sunset
Genre: Poetry
Rating: G
Warnings: N /A
Characters: Celeborn, Galadriel
Pairings: Celeborn/Galadriel
Summary: Someone else besides three hobbits watched that ship sail from the Grey Havens.

Grey Sails at Sunset


For three ages of the world they have been together;
The fourth sees them apart. She passed the test.
She passes into the West, sailing, sailing West.
She is not diminished in his eyes.
Nor will her beauty fade away.
He watches the grey sails.
His time will come.
She will wait.
Love is
Strong.

Comments

[azalaisdep.livejournal.com]

Lovely - and I do admire the structure! Is there a name for a poem structured like that? (I've got the Poetic Forms card, and am slightly dreading some of the ones I've never heard of...)

[dreamflower]

It's called a dribble (starts with ten words, dribbles down to one) and so far as I know, is a form unique to fanfic.

I have Poetic Forms too, but so far haven't had any of my numbers called. I love structured poetry, so I look forward to trying some that I've never heard of either.

[azalaisdep.livejournal.com]

But O67 came up the other day - Sonnet?? Surely your Poetic Forms card can't be different from mine? [is confused]

[dreamflower]

Perhaps I missed seeing it when I checked. I get rather confused at times. I have ten cards, and I don't know how some of these people with 20 or more are managing!

[azalaisdep.livejournal.com]

I've heard rumours of everything from Excel spreadsheets to full-scale databases. Frankly, I can't help feeling that if that amount of effort is going into keeping track of prompts before people even think about doing any writing, things are getting slightly out of hand... ;-)