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moetushie ([personal profile] moetushie) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2015-03-13 11:28 pm

"A Quiet Moment" by Zeen

B2MeM Challenge: Noldorin Areas of Beleriand - Maedhros and Fingon spending time together sometime during the Siege of Angband. A quiet moment for them, in spite of all the problems around. Could include Maglor, or Caranthir, helping them to have this moment.
Format: Drabble
Genre: Humor (Attempted)
Rating: General
Warnings: None
Characters: Fingon, Maedhros, Caranthir
Pairing: Fingon/Maedhros
Summary: Fëanorians make for terrible houseguests, especially to other Fëanorians.
Creator's Notes: After multiple attempts to write about Fingon and Maedhros’ romantic getaway to beautiful Lake Helevorn, I gave up and wrote this drabble instead. A quiet moment was attempted, anyway.



“Look here,” Fingon said seriously. “The whole thing is perfect. The mountains, the lake, the whacking big moon overhead. The pines whisper in the wind, and the air is as pure as a maiden’s heart. And here I am, with my arm just casually thrown over your shoulder -- and yet here you are, writing correspondence as if you are back in Himring! Maitimo, this is unacceptable!”

When Fingon tried to snatch his quill away, Maedhros fended him off and said, “Findekáno, you know that Carnistir requires ample prior notice before any of us visit.”

“We are already here!”

“I know!”

[identity profile] kayleelupin.livejournal.com 2015-03-14 05:13 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know what about this exactly set me off, but I couldn't stop giggling for a while. :D So funny! ^_^

[identity profile] silver-trails.livejournal.com 2015-03-14 03:10 pm (UTC)(link)
This was delicious! And hilarious! =)

[identity profile] ladyelleth.livejournal.com 2015-03-14 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Fingon, to go that ignored. I'm sure Maedhros will take good care of him later, though - really, what he does is only sensible; it might be more uncomfortable if they dropped by completely unannounced and ended up having to camp out in the wilds because Caranthir refused to open his gates. :P

[identity profile] heartofoshun.livejournal.com 2015-03-16 12:32 am (UTC)(link)
I think Carnistir will them in. But there is no harm in taking an additional precaution, if a little late. (Wow! Sounds like the story of my life!)

They are all three adorable in this story!

[identity profile] suzll.livejournal.com 2015-03-14 06:08 pm (UTC)(link)
HAH! Amazing!
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[personal profile] hhimring 2015-03-15 08:41 am (UTC)(link)
Ah--I was wondering whether they had already gate-crashed and Maedhros was engaged in penning a handsome apology, but I see by your explanation in the comments that, although they are already there, Caranthir hasn't spotted them yet and Maedhros is arranging a last-minute invitation!

They might not be that bad as house-guests, by Caranthir's standards? After all, if Fingon gets his way, they'll be occupied with each other and leave Caranthir pretty much alone!
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[personal profile] hhimring 2015-03-17 08:17 am (UTC)(link)
It's really quite greedy, because you've given us such a lovely glimpse of serious Fingon under a whacking big moon, but I find I have a mild hankering for a matching drabble from Caranthir's POV.
Edited 2015-03-17 08:18 (UTC)
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[identity profile] rhapsody11.livejournal.com 2015-03-15 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahaha, I am wondering who the poor soul will be who has to deliver the news. I can so imagine that!

[identity profile] starbrow.livejournal.com 2015-03-15 06:19 pm (UTC)(link)
Hah! I love this - my idea for 'a quiet moment' for them also went very badly wrong - so wrong in fact that I'm not even sure I can use it for the prompt anymore!
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[personal profile] zdenka 2015-05-07 03:18 am (UTC)(link)
I like this. It made me smile.