http://ninquetari.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] ninquetari.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2014-02-23 12:15 am

"Chronicles" by Ninquetari

Title: Chronicles
Author Name: Ninquetari
Prompt: The Four Seasons
Summary: Seasons and history, represented in Haiku.
Rating: G
Warnings: None


(Spring)

Newly created,
Bright, beautiful, peaceful:
The spring of Arda.

(Summer)

Young, curious Elves
prospering under mingled light
of silver and gold.

(Autumn)

Cherished remains,
trying to maintain glory
of failing hopes.

(Winter)

Dark, bereaved land
haunted by prophesied fate.
Yet hope remains.

[identity profile] mirach-ravaia.livejournal.com 2014-03-07 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Beautiful capturing of the atmosphere of the individual stages of the history of Arda with just a few words! It reminds me on Tolkien's poem "Trees of Kortirion" - the feeling of it is similar, although it is much longer.