ext_229077 ([identity profile] ignoblebard.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] b2mem2012-03-05 06:18 pm

Maglor the Mighty

B2MeM Challenge:I18 Sons of Feanor: Maglor the Mighty, N43 Four Words Drabble: Smith, Consonance, Cradle, Mantle
Format:Drabble
Genre:Vignette
Rating:G
Warnings:None
Characters:Nerdanel, Maglor
Summary: A mother's thoughts

Nerdanel rocks the cradle with a loving hand. In the distance she hears the consonance of metal striking metal.

She strokes Macalaurë’s midnight locks. Her beautiful, brave boy. When Fëanáro holds him he tugs his father’s hair, boldly meeting the piercing gaze that compels others, even little Maitimo, to look away. His chubby arms are already able to hold a hammer. Will he be a great smith? Deceptively delicate fingers curl at his rosy cheek. An artist of eminence?

Nerdanel picks up the tiny mantle she sews for his begetting day, choosing thread to match the color of his eyes.
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[identity profile] heartofoshun.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like this! I picture him as being somewhat of a surprise to his family as well--you were inspired by his mother name: forging gold? Maglor the mighty singer. I love it actually.

[identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com 2012-03-06 04:50 pm (UTC)(link)
That's a perfect mother/child moment, watching a sleeping babe and wondering what his future holds - and being a bit off with the guesses.

[identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com 2012-03-07 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
Already he has stolen the heart of one woman, even if she is his mother. Perfect images this evokes.