B2MEM Fic: But Have Not Love

[marta-bee.livejournal.com]

B2MeM Challenge:O68: Maedhros searches for Elured Elurin (Feanatics card)
Format: Ficlet (864 words)
Genre: Drama
Rating: Teen (for battle gore)
Characters: Maedhros, Maglor
Pairings: n/a
Beta: Ellynn
Summary: "The cruel servants of Celegorm seized his young sons and left them to starve in the forest. Of this Maedhros indeed repented, and sought for them long in the woods of Doriath; but his search was unavailing."

But Have Not Love

Comments

[febobe.livejournal.com]

I have always been entranced by the tale of Elured and Elurin, even started a 20-Rings set on them long ago (need to finish it!), and this is a lovely take on the whole matter.

[marta-bee.livejournal.com]

Little tidbits like that always grab my fancy. Those two are so sad! I'm glad you enjoyed this look at the moment.

[heartofoshun.livejournal.com]

I like the insight you give the reader of different aspects of Maedhros and Maglor in this. I've always been unable to think of the futile search for Dior's sons without contrasting it in my head to the fostering of Elrond and Elros. In this story you have Maedhros seeking to rescue the twins and unable to find them. Then later it is Maglor who expresses the desire to care for Elrond and Elros. The two tales always made me feel like the oldest Feanorian brothers still had room for nurturing despite the heartbreak of the loss of all of those younger brothers. I found your telling effective and just a tad off center from the usual fanon in a lovely and thought-provoking way.

[marta-bee.livejournal.com]

I think these two stories (Elured + Elurin, Elros + Elrond) are a big part of what makes Maedhros and Maglor such interesting characters to me. There are other factors, no doubt, but the desire to turn away from their past deeds - that always speaks to me deeply. I know you have put more thought into these characters than I have, so I am glad to see my portrayal resonating with you. Thank you for reading.

[heartofoshun.livejournal.com]

The pleasure was all mine. Thank you for sharing.

[engarian.livejournal.com]

This was really nicely done with well rounded fully envisioned characterizations.

- Erulisse (one L)