I love this phrase: the tear in the world that the death of God the Giver left – from chaos in-seeping to wreak vengeance. And this: All is momentum, as everything comes undone. Wow. The descriptions of Ithilien as "stifling" and "poison green" are also a great turn in perspective. With Nhakinet's repeated exhortations and fragmented thoughts, you capture fear and panic so well. Pretty awful to think of farmer-conscripts coming up against Faramir's Rangers. A wonderful companion/follow-up to your Melkor/proto-Haradrim drabble sequence.
Also: Pairings: OMC/Annatar/Melkor
Threesome with Sauron and Melkor? That sounds almost as terrifying as Newt/Rick/Planned Parenthood! :p
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Date: 2012-03-13 09:07 pm (UTC)Compliment. Obviously.
I love this phrase: the tear in the world that the death of God the Giver left – from chaos in-seeping to wreak vengeance. And this: All is momentum, as everything comes undone. Wow. The descriptions of Ithilien as "stifling" and "poison green" are also a great turn in perspective. With Nhakinet's repeated exhortations and fragmented thoughts, you capture fear and panic so well. Pretty awful to think of farmer-conscripts coming up against Faramir's Rangers. A wonderful companion/follow-up to your Melkor/proto-Haradrim drabble sequence.
Also: Pairings: OMC/Annatar/Melkor
Threesome with Sauron and Melkor? That sounds almost as terrifying as Newt/Rick/Planned Parenthood! :p