It wasn't going to be a drabble originally - it was much sparser and each line was only about half the length. But then I tried a process pretty much the reverse of my usual drabble-writing - a few words here, more there - and got there without, I hope, it feeling too obviously padded out. I was interested to note that as the lines got longer they also got more alliterative...
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Date: 2012-03-13 04:53 pm (UTC)