*Large, flat eyes stared up at him, and he began to feel something like fear.^ That's - creepy and very uncomfortable. I had to come back and find this after I read your latest post - glad to find there's more, I'll certainly check it out.
Your descriptions are wonderful, I could see everything. I love the way they interact - as someone said below, they come across rather like siblings, and I like that idea.
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Date: 2012-03-16 02:46 am (UTC)Your descriptions are wonderful, I could see everything. I love the way they interact - as someone said below, they come across rather like siblings, and I like that idea.