Back to Middle-earth Month

Ha! This is great--I like his critique of the drabble format.

...but her allegiance to family should have been clear enough that I should not have imagined it necessary to emphasize it in this manner.

Nope, he probably wouldn't have.

There seems to be either a carelessness to this very diplomatic seduction or else a calculation that is both dismaying and out of place in context.

Clearly he's never seen a Femslash B2MeM Bingo Card, has he?

Very well done. But I have to admit, I still like "Tolkien's" review of "Semper Fi," as well. *cough*