I guess "incompetence" is probably a bit harsh of me. Well, in any case, I found your solution more feasible than "she just got lost."
Obviously can't do romance right, or at even with any semblance to normality. xD
Oh but normal can be boring sometimes. I thought this was effective, whether normal or not. The only love scene I recall writing was for an original work many years back...and I came back to look at the story a year later, nearly gagged and said "No, this won't do, they need to not get together, oh and also everyone needs to die at the end." Evidently romance isn't for all of us. =D
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Date: 2012-03-24 03:57 pm (UTC)Obviously can't do romance right, or at even with any semblance to normality. xD
Oh but normal can be boring sometimes. I thought this was effective, whether normal or not.
The only love scene I recall writing was for an original work many years back...and I came back to look at the story a year later, nearly gagged and said "No, this won't do, they need to not get together, oh and also everyone needs to die at the end." Evidently romance isn't for all of us. =D