I thoroughly enjoyed your positing of a female in the role of chieftain! I further appreciated that she was a well balanced character, one with resolve, hidden reserves, and a great deal of tenacity.
Great job showing us Ivorwen's tumultuous internal journey to making peace with Adanel, as well as the strength of the bond between Ivorwen and Dirhael. I especially loved watching them flirt and dance - you drew me in and made me feel as if I was part of the crowd around the bonfire.
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Date: 2014-03-10 03:06 am (UTC)Great job showing us Ivorwen's tumultuous internal journey to making peace with Adanel, as well as the strength of the bond between Ivorwen and Dirhael. I especially loved watching them flirt and dance - you drew me in and made me feel as if I was part of the crowd around the bonfire.
Beautifully done all the way around.