I agree with Dawn - great descriptions of Nelyo here, and you've given both brothers a feral, primal quality. That adds a lot to building the sexual tension in this short fic. I'm really curious about those fell creatures, too! Makes me wonder if Oromë "imported" some orcs and wargs for sport, sort of like a hunting reserve.
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Date: 2014-04-01 09:29 pm (UTC)