Thank you! I'm glad the two POVs worked! The language bit is, of course, where the geekishness comes in. I seem to be a bit recalcitrant--my stories are not all dialogue-driven, although they do often tend to be, but the moment I'm actually forbidden to use dialogue, I start thinking about language!
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Date: 2014-03-29 08:00 pm (UTC)The language bit is, of course, where the geekishness comes in. I seem to be a bit recalcitrant--my stories are not all dialogue-driven, although they do often tend to be, but the moment I'm actually forbidden to use dialogue, I start thinking about language!