I hope it will not be offensive to say I love the bite-sized length of this? It captures a very specific, and story-worthy, situation -- the dizzy moment when one realizes one's longing might be requited -- in a very complete way. Knowing how to frame a story is an awesome skill!
I love both their directness, too. "Trying. But it is not so easy*", heh.
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Date: 2014-03-29 05:08 am (UTC)I love both their directness, too. "Trying. But it is not so easy*", heh.
* Though GG is!