Beautiful. Just beautiful. The language and phrasing used is lyrical and paints a vivid picture of the scene and characters.
He wept and felt the misery he had carried for years melt away from him like the last of winter's snow being swept away by spring rain. This line especially is amazing.
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Date: 2015-03-08 01:10 pm (UTC)He wept and felt the misery he had carried for years melt away from him like the last of winter's snow being swept away by spring rain. This line especially is amazing.