Oh, what a lovely story. I love Lúthien with a touch of the fay about her.
“If so - your cousin Galadriel resides in Menegroth, and we shall both be certain to make it a pleasant captivity for you. She told me much about you, and if I have learned anything in my life, then that chance meetings are opportunities to sate curiosities… and other impulses. I do not think you shall be found. I put a sleep upon my guards, and yours will not be able to track us here. We are inside the Girdle now, and if they wake, they cannot pass without guidance.”
Now there is an implication that I could drive a truck through. Perhaps Galadriel has told Lúthien some stories of their wayward youth together in Valinor. It's also quite hilarious that she would use her special powers to knock out the guards so she could have her wicked way with Galadriel's beautiful, mischievous cousin.
The story fits into the canon versions of both willful Aredhel and curious Lúthien, while containing the traditional stories of the enchantment or seduction by a the beautiufl sorceress or fairy witch. Beautifully done.
The explicit sexy parts are lovely and seem so natural in Aredhel's POV. Well done!
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Date: 2015-03-08 06:25 am (UTC)“If so - your cousin Galadriel resides in Menegroth, and we shall both be certain to make it a pleasant captivity for you. She told me much about you, and if I have learned anything in my life, then that chance meetings are opportunities to sate curiosities… and other impulses. I do not think you shall be found. I put a sleep upon my guards, and yours will not be able to track us here. We are inside the Girdle now, and if they wake, they cannot pass without guidance.”
Now there is an implication that I could drive a truck through. Perhaps Galadriel has told Lúthien some stories of their wayward youth together in Valinor. It's also quite hilarious that she would use her special powers to knock out the guards so she could have her wicked way with Galadriel's beautiful, mischievous cousin.
The story fits into the canon versions of both willful Aredhel and curious Lúthien, while containing the traditional stories of the enchantment or seduction by a the beautiufl sorceress or fairy witch. Beautifully done.
The explicit sexy parts are lovely and seem so natural in Aredhel's POV. Well done!