I love this story. The language is very beautiful, and it gives that sense of a story continuing beyond the frame which is one of my favorite things about Tolkien. I really like your version of Goldberry and the way she is always a little alien, and the origin story of Tom and Goldberry is fascinating. I hope you'll write more about it someday. I like your narrator too! Though I can't help being sad for her.
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Date: 2015-05-07 02:38 am (UTC)