Thank you - I love to hear stories actually told in Olde English, for the rhythm, and I was brought up on the sagas of Noggin the Nog - so this was as much about the way it would sound, as about the story.
So I am so glad that it feels right to other people, too!
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Date: 2015-03-16 03:13 pm (UTC)So I am so glad that it feels right to other people, too!