<3 Finrod! I never get tired of reading about him.
Your Bregor is so cute.
Wouldn't Beor still have been called Balan at this point?
(Minor proofreading nitpick: Only six! He kept forgetting that these Men lived such short lives compared to Elves. would work better if the second sentence was either un-italicized, or first-person and present tense).
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Date: 2017-03-19 12:12 am (UTC)Your Bregor is so cute.
Wouldn't Beor still have been called Balan at this point?
(Minor proofreading nitpick: Only six! He kept forgetting that these Men lived such short lives compared to Elves. would work better if the second sentence was either un-italicized, or first-person and present tense).