I love so much about this - the pairing itself, the idea that there are female Ringwraiths, and then your writing. *__* It's gorgeous as usual, but there's something about the prose here that really stands out even if I can't put my finger on what it is exactly.
And oh, Goldberry - "her waters" is such a spot-on observation about the way she'd think, and I love her collection of sensations. It makes her stand out as a spirit. <3 Having Nînazîr not occur in the songs that she's hearing must be heartbreaking, not just for loneliness, but also with the implication that she's still alive (for a given value of that).
And it's beautiful - if so sad - that Nînazîr can remember Goldberry with as much clarity as she feels the Ring influence her. (You're still in trouble for this, by the way. *nosekisses* <3)
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Date: 2018-03-03 09:15 pm (UTC)And oh, Goldberry - "her waters" is such a spot-on observation about the way she'd think, and I love her collection of sensations. It makes her stand out as a spirit. <3 Having Nînazîr not occur in the songs that she's hearing must be heartbreaking, not just for loneliness, but also with the implication that she's still alive (for a given value of that).
And it's beautiful - if so sad - that Nînazîr can remember Goldberry with as much clarity as she feels the Ring influence her. (You're still in trouble for this, by the way. *nosekisses* <3)