That last sentence: so sad that the song remains unfinished, although how could it be, now? A really good use of the prompt.
And the description of how Daeron deliberately imposes the silence in his anger! It really works. It's a sort of reverse Orpheus effect, not nature sympathizing with the singer but the singer punishing nature after he has become out of tune with it.
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Date: 2018-03-18 08:33 pm (UTC)And the description of how Daeron deliberately imposes the silence in his anger! It really works. It's a sort of reverse Orpheus effect, not nature sympathizing with the singer but the singer punishing nature after he has become out of tune with it.