Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it. I'm glad you liked the connections there and Miriel's childhood memory.
I'm also glad you picked up on the sense of fear. I was worried about striking the right balance with that and not being too unclear or too heavy-handed, and it's important to the story.
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Date: 2018-03-23 05:50 am (UTC)I'm also glad you picked up on the sense of fear. I was worried about striking the right balance with that and not being too unclear or too heavy-handed, and it's important to the story.