I like the descriptions: "A former orc, her outline still uncertain, lay with her head in the lap of the warrior who slew her." "Celegorm no longer fair, Curufin come to craft’s end, Caranthir gone dark." And that final sentence is very good: "And this, too, was a kind of silence."
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Date: 2018-03-29 12:29 pm (UTC)"A former orc, her outline still uncertain, lay with her head in the lap of the warrior who slew her."
"Celegorm no longer fair, Curufin come to craft’s end, Caranthir gone dark."
And that final sentence is very good: "And this, too, was a kind of silence."