I loved this, Marta! Caranthir's voice/inner narrative is so clear and strong. Very nice work there. Much to chew over in the "deep thoughts" department. And even this "non-philosopher" understood it. ;^)
As an aside, I made a brief commentary on the Oath through a character (whom you know well), and it takes a more humanistic view, not surprisingly. I don't want to SSP in a response to your excellent story, so will send under separate cover.
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Date: 2012-03-01 12:49 pm (UTC)As an aside, I made a brief commentary on the Oath through a character (whom you know well), and it takes a more humanistic view, not surprisingly. I don't want to SSP in a response to your excellent story, so will send under separate cover.
Again, very well done.