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Title: Maglor Tunes a Guitar
Author Name: Himring
Prompt: Durin's Day (Seasons of Middle-earth: Autumn)
Summary: In Umbar, Maglor tunes a guitar in the Feanorian manner. (No, not what you think: nobody dies!)
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: moderate violence (very much non-graphic)
Author's Notes: With thanks for inspiration to [livejournal.com profile] tehta and [livejournal.com profile] anna_wing. (Apologies for the way I used the prompt; the Dwarves refused to talk.)



‘You have a bit of a problem, my friend.’
Palamid froze. He had known he was taking a risk, daring to play in this corner of the market square, but he had thought he knew all Snub Nose’s thugs and had been keeping his eyes peeled. The foreign vagabond had not seemed dangerous—but how could he have overlooked that those rags were suspiciously, almost unnaturally clean? He knew from experience how difficult it was to get access to a sufficient supply of water round here if you were poor.
The stranger stretched out his hand towards Palamid’s guitar.
‘Give it to me.’
Oh no. This was worse than he had feared. Palamid’s guts contracted as the stranger’s fingers closed around the guitar’s neck.
‘Please,’ he said, tears in his eyes. ‘Not the guitar. Please don’t break my guitar! I promise I will go away and never try to play here again! I really do.’
The stranger blinked.
‘I’m not planning to break it,’ he said, in a soothing tone of voice. ‘I’m going to make it sound better.’
He gave the guitar a little tug. Helplessly, Palamid let go and watched, in mingled hope and disbelief, as the stranger actually began to tune it! He took his time about it, too—twiddling a peg, plucking a string, giving the peg another little turn…
‘It’s old and has seen much use,’ the stranger said, without raising his eyes from his task. ‘But a decent instrument nonetheless. It deserves care.’
 As Palamid watched in fascination, he realized there was something not quite right about the movements of the stranger’s right hand, but he couldn’t get a clear view of his palm. Anyway, the stranger was done now. He swept his hand across the strings. It was a simple chord, but the notes rang astonishingly clear and true. The stranger was right; Palamid’s poor old guitar had never sounded so good.
‘Hey you! Whaddja think yer doing?!’
Palamid had been so preoccupied with the odd ways of this pale foreigner that he had completely forgotten to look out for Snub Nose’s thugs. This one, Cauliflower Ear, was way, way too close, practically breathing down the stranger’s neck. Palamid gave a strangled cry and flattened himself against the wall behind him.
It happened so fast that he couldn’t see what the stranger did. Suddenly, Cauliflower Ear was in the gutter, not dead, judging by the groans, but possibly wishing he were, right now. The stranger, it seemed, wasn’t even out of breath. The guitar, to Palamid’s great relief, was intact.
‘We seem to be attracting the wrong kind of attention,’ said the stranger to him. ‘Let’s go.’
He walked off, still carrying the guitar. Palamid hurried after him.
‘Where are we going?’ he dared to ask, when they were far enough away from Cauliflower Ear.
‘To a music shop, of course’, the stranger answered.
***
By that evening, Palamid was the proud possessor of a pitch pipe.
The words of the stranger still rang in his ears: ‘No use deluding yourself you’ve got perfect pitch if you don’t. Even some of the best musicians don’t. So use that pipe!’
It would take time to work it out, thought Palamid, gazing at the pipe again, then putting it away.
The stranger had just swept out of his life again as suddenly as he had appeared, striding away as the sun began to set, vanishing into the gathering dusk. Although he had bought a substantial supper for both of them before he left, there was an odd hollow feeling to Palamid’s stomach. He looked up. It was late autumn. A thin new moon was riding high in the sky.



Date: 2014-03-15 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
I can just see that - especially Maglor being frustrated by the not-quite-in-tune guitar!

Date: 2014-03-16 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] keiliss.livejournal.com
A musician is a musician is a musician. Always. And I'm sure he's quite satisfyingly good at dealing with cheap thugs *g*.

If I beg, will you write more of these? Because I loved it so much!

Date: 2014-03-16 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittotter.livejournal.com
hehe, I liked this -- Maglor, haunting the coasts for out-of-tune instruments! Palamid is a fortunate guitarist, and had a merry Durin's day indeed.
And nobody died!

Date: 2014-03-16 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tanis2014.livejournal.com
LOL - you make me want to say - who was that masked man - even if he was only cloaked! A little musical magic to celebrate Durin's Day and perhaps someday Palamid will mention this strange little adventure, find out who his mysterious benfactor really was, and dine out on his discovery for years to come!

Date: 2014-03-16 04:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silver-trails.livejournal.com
This is a lovely story!

Date: 2014-03-16 08:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binkaslibrary.livejournal.com
I can so see Maglor in this little fic. A not-so-saint patron of street musicians and vagabonds :) What a lovely idea. Thank you for this.

Date: 2014-03-16 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
This was most enjoyable and different.

Date: 2014-03-16 10:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tehta.livejournal.com
I am so glad that our slander of Maglor's character inspired this! It is a lovely story, showcasing what a decent person he really is.

Date: 2014-03-16 07:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zopyrus.livejournal.com
Hah! This was, indeed, not what I expected--but I like your down-to-earth imagining of Maglor's post-silmaril life. I can totally see this happening.

Date: 2014-03-16 08:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilye-elf.livejournal.com
This was great :) I can so see Maglor doing something like this - he's lost none of his charm, apparently!

Also had to laugh at the vagabonds' names.

Date: 2014-03-16 11:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelica-ramses.livejournal.com
Very Maglor: musician, warrior, generous prince despite the rags, an almost mythical figure coming in and out of people's lives. Lovely story.

Date: 2014-03-17 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elliska.livejournal.com
Maglor is my absolute favorite son of Feanor, and I love stories of him, post Silmarils. This is great. You do a great job showing Palamid's fear and he has a great voice (Snub Nose and Cauliflower Ear are great!). And I can so see Maglor doing this. Loved it.

Date: 2014-03-18 06:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyelleth.livejournal.com
Maglor would do that, wouldn't he? I love the idea of him going through Umbar, occasionally touching lives (and instruments) to make them better, and Palamid is a wonderful character.

The ending - fittingly bittersweet.

Date: 2014-03-19 09:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] astris-eldalie.livejournal.com
I absolutely loved this. Palamid has a wonderfully distinctive voice, and I love the idea of Maglor as a wandering savior (of a sort). And music still being the thing he cares about most, of course.

Date: 2014-03-23 09:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petite-dilly.livejournal.com
Cela donne envie de lire d'autres aventures de Maglor après le Premier Age !

Date: 2014-03-23 06:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] petite-dilly.livejournal.com
Merci pour le lien !

Date: 2014-03-27 01:11 am (UTC)
ysilme: Wooden door handle shaped like a sperm whale on a red barn door. (NaNo 2017)
From: [personal profile] ysilme
This is great. You're creating a very real own character here in a few words, setting off another side to Maglor and another glimpse into his wandering life; a moment I can see very well. I like very much to see Maglor at this moment in this way.

Date: 2014-03-31 09:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heartofoshun.livejournal.com
Good grief! I have this one on my list of stories I had already reviewed also. My memory of it was so vivid. Another very nice story, which is a convincing moment that extends the canon and imagines something that might have been. I love the pitch pipe! My ear is so bad, that even with a pitch pipe I had trouble tuning a guitar. (Of course, I gave it up. But I never had a serious relationship with a man who was not a decent musician and Laura's dad was a bit of prodigy. I can see Maglor wanting to put the whole world in tune. It's not just altruism, my ex- was visibly pained by an even slightly out-of-tune instrument.)

Date: 2014-04-09 07:22 pm (UTC)
independence1776: Drawing of Maglor with a harp on right, words "sing of honor lost" and "Noldolantë" on the left and bottom, respectively (Default)
From: [personal profile] independence1776
I really like this! It's definitely something Maglor would do given half a chance.

Date: 2014-04-13 12:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com
Quite the wondrous encounter! Palamid is quite a good deal enriched by this encounter with a legend he may have only heard echoes of up to now.

Date: 2014-04-16 09:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com
Yes, my birthday was on Sunday, the day before you answered me. I was working, but was able to take a few minutes on my break to do some reading and reviewing. I had a good day, actually, and look forward to this coming Sunday and Easter at this point! Hope to have more reviewed before then!

Date: 2014-05-15 12:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pandemonium-213.livejournal.com
This is a great little vignette, himring! You really do a nice job of setting up the scene and the way Palamid perceives this stranger, e.g. "those rags were suspiciously, almost unnaturally clean? He knew from experience how difficult it was to get access to a sufficient supply of water round here if you were poor." I love the idea that Maglor feels so compelled to "fix" Palamid's out-of-whack guitar. Speaks to a mix of perfectionism and kindness. A mysterious ending, too!

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