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B2MeM Challenge: Based on this prompt by [livejournal.com profile] lindahoyland: Where did the kitten come from? Is it lost? Does it lead our M-e heroes and heroines into adventures? Gen.
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Format: Ficlet
Genre: Fluff
Rating: G
Warnings: n/a
Characters: Sam Gamgee, Elanor Gamgee, Rose Gamgee
Pairings: Sam/Rose
Creators' Notes (optional): Tater and Strawberry are OCs from my story “Testaments of the Past” co-written with Gryffinjack.
Summary: Little Elanor is upset when one of her kittens goes missing.


Tater's Adventure



"Sam-dad!"

Sam glanced up from the box of seeds he was sorting through as he heard the patter of Elanor's little feet padding through the smial. "I'm in the kitchen, Elanorelle," he called. Her voice sounded urgent.

"What is it?" he asked. "Is something wrong?" For her little face was scrunched up in distress, and he could see that she had been weeping.

"Da, Tater is missing!"

"Ah!" Tater was one of their cat Strawberry's recent litter of kittens. The oldest and boldest of three ginger males and one white female. Elanor had named them Tater, Turnip, Tomato and Truffle.

"Strawberry was crying! She can't find him neither!"

"Are the rest of the kitties in the garden shed?" Sam asked.

She nodded her head mournfully. "Uh-huh. But Tater's not there. I looked and looked. And I looked outside, too."

Sam stood up and held out his hand. "Come along then, Elanorelle, and we'll look for him."

xoxoxoxoxox

Biggest Brother prowled low to the ground in the brush beneath the shrubs. He had finally figured out the secret of the leather flap through which Mother occasionally disappeared, and now he could explore all he wished!

First he had followed a bright fluttery thing, that flapped about in the air, first temptingly in front of his face, and then tantalizingly just out of reach. But it finally flew out of sight. Then he saw a small hopping thing, that let out little buzzy chirps as it jumped away from him. Prey! Perhaps he could catch it and take it home to Mother to prove what a mighty hunter he was! He had pounced at it several times before it led him here, and then it had vanished. He would have been disappointed, save that he could see one of the feathery things that flew in the sky. It darted down to seize a berry, which it was devouring at the top of the bush. But when Biggest Brother tried to climb up, the leaves and branches shook and the feathery thing also flew away out of reach.

He was beginning to be tired, and if truth be told, hungry as well. Perhaps he should go home to Mother and his sibs, even if he had no prey. He still had a mighty adventure to tell them of. But it was ever so far back to the cosy den beyond the leather flap.

"Tater! Tater! Where are you?" He heard the voice of the Smaller Two-legs, who came to visit the den from time to time, with gentle hands and a soft voice. She would hold him carefully in her lap and he would purr for her. She was calling the word she used for him, what Mother called his "hobbit-name".

"Kitty! Kitty! Kitty!" That was the voice of the Large Two-legs. He came often to the den, and brought with him food for Mother, which she sometimes deigned to share. Then he would fetch away objects, or bring objects, or sometimes sit there and mess about with objects. He, too, had a gentle way with kittens, though his hands were not so soft.

For just an instant, Biggest Brother thought of hiding deeper in the shrubbery to make a game of them finding him. But he was tired and hungry, and it would be much faster and easier for the two-legs to carry him back to the den.

"Mew!" he called. "Mew! Meoww!"

He could hear the heavy feet of the two-legs running towards him.

"Tater!" The Smaller Two-legs cried out in her high-pitched voice. Soon her little hands reached in to pluck him out from his hiding place.

"Bless me!" rumbled the Larger Two-legs. "How did you come so far all on your lonesome?" He reached down to where Biggest Brother was cuddled on Smaller Two-legs' shoulder, and scratched his head. That felt nice, and Biggest Brother leaned happily into his touch. "Well, let's get you home to your ma!"

xoxoxoxoxoxox

As the family sat at tea, Elanor chattered happily about the excitement. Rose and Baby Frodo had missed it all, being down at the village when it happened.

"And we found him right under the lilac bushes under the kitchen window, Mummy!" said Elanor as she plucked another bit of shortbread from the plate.

"Well, Ellie, that's a far piece for a little kitten like him to go all on his own!"

Sam finished swallowing his own shortbread and took a sip of his tea. "He's a bold one all right! He's figured out his ma's cat flap. I put a box beneath it. Strawberry'll be able to leap out easy enough, but it'll be more trouble for the little ones. But they're getting older, no keeping them penned up too much longer." He gave Rose a look.

"I reckon it's time for us to start finding homes for the kitties,” she said. At the downcast look on her daughter's face, she added, "Don't you think the Gaffer might like one? Do you think he'd like to have Tater?"

Diverted by the idea of her Gaffer with a kitten, Elanor grinned and clapped her hands.

Sam just sat back and admired his little family.

xoxoxoxoxox

Strawberry admired her four children, nursing away. Their little teeth were getting sharp though; it was time to wean them. Soon they'd be old enough to move away, and she once more would have some peace and quiet.

Date: 2015-03-01 02:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
This is just delightful. I'm so thrilled that my photo should inspire such a lovely story. I especially enjoyed the part from the kitten's point of view.

Harry is curled beside me as I read.

Date: 2015-03-01 02:28 pm (UTC)
paranoidangel: PA (Default)
From: [personal profile] paranoidangel
I love this, it's so sweet.

Date: 2015-03-01 03:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karri-kln1671.livejournal.com
Delightful story! I enjoyed that enormously.

Date: 2015-03-01 03:01 pm (UTC)
zdenka: A bird made of flowers. (cheerful)
From: [personal profile] zdenka
Aww! :) That's very sweet, hobbits and kittens alike. And it's fun to read a story that goes with a picture of a familiar cat. :)

Date: 2015-03-01 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
As I said at SoA [and then thought of the farthings... :) ] I think this is a lovely response to the prompt - I hope the Gaffer and Tater have many happy years together.

Date: 2015-03-01 03:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starbrow.livejournal.com
Aww, so cute! 'Tater' is an adorable name for a kitten in Sam's family and I loved hearing about kitty's adventures through the wilderness of the garden. :)

Date: 2015-03-01 04:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wellinghall.livejournal.com
Oh, that is lovely!

Date: 2015-03-01 05:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com
So very like a kitten to wander from excitement to excitement, then to realize how far from home he had traveled. It is indeed time to be finding new homes for the four young ones, and the Gaffer sounds like the perfect home for Tater.

- Erulisse (one L)

Date: 2015-03-01 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kayleelupin.livejournal.com
Tater is so cute!! I love his Adventure, and especially his thoughts on prey, and then realizing how far he went from home. I'm so glad Sam and Elanor brought him back, and that he will have a new home with the Gaffer!!

Date: 2015-03-01 06:50 pm (UTC)
ysilme: Close up of the bow of a historic transport boat with part of the sail. (Smilla)
From: [personal profile] ysilme
Aw, this was so lovely! ♥ The cat and kitten names are adorable, and Tater's adventures are spot on - I can see him just before my eyes (knowing Linda's Harry helps a lot, of course *g* ). I particularly enjoyed the part from his own POV.

Date: 2015-03-01 11:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] heartofoshun.livejournal.com
Nice job with the little kitten's POV.

Diverted by the idea of her Gaffer with a kitten, Elanor grinned and clapped her hands.

The old divert, deflect, distract trick. Hopefully, it will work long-term.

Date: 2015-03-02 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samtyr.livejournal.com
This was very sweet. I especially enjoyed reading from the kitten's (and the mama cat's) pov. Tater is a typical kitten: always one for adventure and then needing to be 'rescued' by his pet two-legs. I am sure he will get along great with the Gaffer. :)

Date: 2015-03-02 10:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] binkaslibrary.livejournal.com
Awww, this is lovely, really lovely, and I so love to read a story from a kitty's PoV. Well done!

Date: 2015-03-02 09:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mews1945.livejournal.com
Pure delightful fluff indeed. Tater is an adventurous little chap. it's a good thing he has Elanor to come and find him.

Date: 2015-03-04 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lady-branwyn.livejournal.com
Aw! What a sweet story!

Date: 2015-03-04 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grey-wonderer.livejournal.com
Hehehe, the kitty's hobbit name. That was cute. I thought of Logan's Run and the scene about how all cats had three names. Well, four if you count their hobbit names.

Date: 2015-03-04 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyelleth.livejournal.com
Cute! I loved the names Elanor gave them, too! :)

Date: 2015-03-05 10:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elliska.livejournal.com
This is wonderful all the way around, but I absolutely adore the kitten POV. You nailed that!

Date: 2015-03-08 11:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhymer23.livejournal.com
Ah! Sweet! I like the contrast between the hobbits' viewpoint and the cat's own viewpoint: how a tiny kitten becomes Biggest Brother engaged on an adventure (although still a very small kitten who wants to be carried home.) I expect he will have many more Mighty Adventures to come, even if the foolish Two-Legs he lives with insist on thinking of him as just a little cat who doesn't do much more than sleep and eat.

Date: 2015-03-08 06:47 pm (UTC)
hhimring: Tolkien's monogram (Tolkien)
From: [personal profile] hhimring
I like the bit from the kitten's POV especially--but of course it's actually more effective because we know what's going on from the hobbits' point of view!

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