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B2MeM Challenge: 2012 Bingo “AU: Who Lives and Who Dies?" B-15, I-23, I-26
Format: Drabble
Genre: General
Rating: G
Warnings: N/A
Characters: Denethor, Imrahil, Faramir, Finduilas, Pippin
Pairings: N/A
Summary: Three ‘What if” drabbles for the House of Húrin.

Prompt B-15: Denethor never dies:
“Ever have you been a faithful counselor, my friend. I cannot see why you now stand against me,” Denethor said, drumming his fingers against his desk.
His father-in-law stood in the center of the Citadel study, dressed in the blue surcoat of the Swan Knights.
“Yet what if he is indeed Isildur’s heir?” Imrahil asked.
“I will never yield to this Aragorn,” Denethor replied curtly. “Not to this usurper from the North. His claims to the throne are spurious.”
“This will mean war,” Imrahil said, softly. “As in the days of the Kin-Strife.”
“Then let there be war!” Denethor declared.

Prompt I-23: Finduilas of Dol Amroth never dies:
“I must needs leave now, Father has—,” Faramir reeled as his mother slapped him, hard.
“I will not allow my husband’s grief to kill us all!” Finduilas hissed.
“What of Father’s orders? He holds my oath, would you have me foresworn?” Faramir asked.
“Better foresworn than dead! Denethor will not sacrifice my remaining son in a fool’s gambit!” she cried. “’Tis folly to attempt a defense of Osgiliath. Go, my son, call for the garrisons to assemble on the Rammas Echor, it was designed to withstand Mordor’s might. Do not fear the consequences, I will deal with your father.”

Prompt I-26: Denethor dies a few years after his wife:
“I also fear I shall never again see my home,” Faramir confided.
“Why not?” asked Pippin.
“I have committed treason in coming here to Rivendell. My brother, the Steward of Gondor, forbade my quest,” Faramir sighed, his features sad.
“My brother, Boromir, is a hard man,” he explained, seeing that the Hobbit did not understand “He became Steward when he was but three and ten years of age, after our Father died. Mother had already perished some years earlier. My brother will never forgive me for deserting him as I have.”
“I’m sorry,” Pippin said.
“As am I,” Faramir replied.

Date: 2016-03-05 06:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kayleelupin.livejournal.com
Oh my goodness...these are so terribly sad, especially the last one! :( But very well written, I enjoyed them even though (because?) they made me cry.

Kaylee Arafinwiel

Date: 2016-03-05 11:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elwenlj.livejournal.com
I like all of these. But I particularly like Finduilas. She sounds like the kind of woman who could stand up to a Steward.

Date: 2016-03-05 12:50 pm (UTC)
dreamflower: gandalf at bag end (Default)
From: [personal profile] dreamflower
What fascinating AUs! I love these little glimpses of a larger and slightly darker world.

I especially like the one with Finduilas--I am sure things would have been different had she lived.

Date: 2016-03-05 04:20 pm (UTC)
shirebound: (Default)
From: [personal profile] shirebound
Well done! These are interesting "what if's".

Date: 2016-03-05 08:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfscribe5.livejournal.com
Enjoyed these. Short and effective, getting to the heart of the matter. It's really interesting to think how a little change in what happened could change everything.

Date: 2016-03-07 06:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rakshathedemon.livejournal.com
Wow, a kickass Finduilas and Boromir becoming Steward as a teenager and later forbidding Faramir to go to Rivendell - fascinating glimpses of might-have-beens!

Date: 2016-03-07 05:22 pm (UTC)
ysilme: Close up of the bow of a historic transport boat with part of the sail. (NaNo 2017)
From: [personal profile] ysilme
Very interesting to see what these "what if's" have as consequences.

Date: 2016-03-16 02:32 pm (UTC)
nialoke: Small, blue-greenish dragon reading a book (Default)
From: [personal profile] nialoke
These are fascinating! I have to agree with so many other commenters, kickass Finduilas was my favourite - also the only one that might be slightly happier than the canon, I guess... But these were all so great! I feel so sorry for both of the brothers in the last one T.T

Date: 2016-03-25 04:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blslarner.livejournal.com
Ooh, three very different might-have-beens! I like each of the three! Such possibilities!

Date: 2016-04-19 03:27 pm (UTC)
independence1776: Drawing of Maglor with a harp on right, words "sing of honor lost" and "Noldolantë" on the left and bottom, respectively (Noldolantë)
From: [personal profile] independence1776
I love these!

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