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B2MeM Prompt and Path: "We go, we go, we go to war, to hew the stone and break the door; for bole and bough are burning now, the furnace roars-- we go to war..." ~JRR Tolkien, The Two Towers. Green path.
Format: Drabble
Genre: Tragedy
Rating: PG
Warnings: Off-screen death
Characters: Oropher; Entwife
Pairings: None
Creator’s Notes (optional): I only recently learned about the tragedy of the Brown Lands. With that quote, this drabble begged to be written.
Summary: As the Last Alliance marches east through desolation, Oropher learns of what befell the Entwives.


The Brown Lands stretched ahead, ashen grey. The Enemy's work.

"Mark your water and rations carefully," called the King, marching Greenwood's elves on through it.

He paused briefly, touching a tiny brown patch on a blackened stump -

Sparks stung her as the inferno moved, a burning wall. A fawn trembled in her roots, hacking and coughing as life forsook it. She tried to coil herself around him, let him pass without having to touch the flames. The fire neared - she would not bow to it, to Him. The Entwife raised her strongest branches like a shield, and thought of Spring.

Date: 2017-03-09 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hrymfaxe.livejournal.com
Oooh I really liked this. You have painted a vivid image with few words.

Date: 2017-03-09 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] engarian.livejournal.com
This is wonderful. It was evocative and descriptive.

- Erulisse (one L)

Date: 2017-03-09 09:02 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] shirebound
Ohhhhh. *sniff*

Date: 2017-03-09 10:31 pm (UTC)
hhimring: Tolkien's monogram (Tolkien)
From: [personal profile] hhimring
Oh, how very sad!
Even more so, considering that after this moment of empathy, Oropher, too, soon will die.
But strongly imagined.

Date: 2017-03-09 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
Just heartrending.

Date: 2017-03-10 02:46 am (UTC)
zdenka: Yellow leaves. (all will yet be well)
From: [personal profile] zdenka
I like this. It's beautiful and sad, and it reminds me of Legolas hearing the lament of the stones in Eregion.

Date: 2017-03-10 06:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com
Just heartrending.

Date: 2017-03-11 06:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] starbrow.livejournal.com
Oh! Such a vivid image, and such a brave Entwife. The poor fawn, I hope it escaped!

Date: 2017-03-13 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithrial.livejournal.com
How sad, but with a hope of spring.
Thrilling hearing it through Thranduil's connection.
King of all Woodland.
Well written. XXX

Date: 2017-03-14 11:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mithrial.livejournal.com
So it was. I had Thranduil in my head as I was working on a picture of him at the time.
Who would you cast to play Oropher if he was in a film? I'm just starting out on playing with photoshop now I have the time. I'd love to do a manip of him - and later a drawing if I can.

Date: 2017-03-16 07:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curiouswombat.livejournal.com
OH... that really gave me a shiver up my spine.

Date: 2017-03-24 03:46 pm (UTC)
independence1776: Drawing of Maglor with a harp on right, words "sing of honor lost" and "Noldolantë" on the left and bottom, respectively (Noldolantë)
From: [personal profile] independence1776
This is painful but beautiful.

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